The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided maps depict the differences in Stokeford settlement changes over a period of 80 years from 1930 to 2010.
Overall
, the most highlighted changes are the increased population, the biggest evidence of
that is
farmland has disappeared over time. It became more urbanised. The most substantial alteration was the rise in property in 2010 on the lands that were farming
area
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in 1930. In the meantime, the roads were constructed to access the new accommodations. There was a large house in the gardens on the eastern side of
area
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in 1930 which transformed
to
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the
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Retirement home in 2010.
Besides
, part of the gardens was removed, and houses were built
instead
. As the state grew, the school was expanded. The north of Stokeford has a bridge above the River Stoke
was
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not moved or demolished running
through
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from
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the northeast to the southwest in the western part of
residential
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a residential
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area. The bridge was connected to the road developing with side roads from 1930 to 2010. The post office and shops were
initially
located next to each other, but the shops were destroyed to make houses.
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  • village
  • maps
  • Stokeford
  • 1930
  • 2010
  • main features
  • overview
  • changes
  • similarities
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