The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The following graph shows the amounts of
waste
generated by 3 companies
during the span of 15 years. It is clear that
companies
A and B
have reduced the amount of waste
during these 15 years whereas
company
C has increased it.
Company
B
decreased their waste
to almost 3 in 2015 tonnes
starting from 8.5 tonnes
in 2000. It is evident that company
B
significantly reduced their waste
production after 2005, until which it saw an incline. On the other hand
, Company
A which had started with the most amount of junk at 12 tonnes
showed a steady decline during the years 2000-2015 and reduced it adequately to about 9 tonnes
.
In contrast
to the other to
Correct your spelling
two
companies
, Company
C started with the lowest waste
in 2000 at about 4 tonnes
but since then
has showed
an incline till the year 2015 Change the verb form
shown
with
producing more than twice the amount of junk it started with at about 10 Change preposition
apply
tonnes
.
To conclude
, Companies
A and B
showed a decline in waste
production while
Company
C showed an incline.Submitted by satyarthverma88 on
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