The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The following graph shows the amounts of
waste
generated by 3
companies
during the span of 15 years.
It is clear that
companies
A and
B
have reduced the amount of
waste
during these 15 years
whereas
company
C has increased it.
Company
B
decreased their
waste
to almost 3 in 2015
tonnes
starting from 8.5
tonnes
in 2000. It is evident that
company
B
significantly reduced their
waste
production after 2005, until which it saw an incline.
On the other hand
,
Company
A which had started with the most amount of junk at 12
tonnes
showed a steady decline during the years 2000-2015 and reduced it adequately to about 9
tonnes
.
In contrast
to the other
to
Correct your spelling
two
show examples
companies
,
Company
C started with the lowest
waste
in 2000 at about 4
tonnes
but since
then
has
showed
Change the verb form
shown
show examples
an incline till the year 2015
with
Change preposition
apply
show examples
producing more than twice the amount of junk it started with at about 10
tonnes
.
To conclude
,
Companies
A and
B
showed a decline in
waste
production
while
Company
C showed an incline.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, companies, b, company, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amounts" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • significant changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • waste production
  • period
  • compare
  • analyze
  • main features
  • highlight
  • decline
  • rise
  • steady
  • variations
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