The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The following graph shows the amounts of

waste

generated by 3

companies

during the span of 15 years.

It is clear that

companies

A and

have reduced the amount of

waste

during these 15 years

whereas

company

C has increased it.

Company

decreased their

waste

to almost 3 in 2015

tonnes

starting from 8.5

tonnes

in 2000. It is evident that

company

significantly reduced their

waste

production after 2005, until which it saw an incline.

On the other hand

Company

A which had started with the most amount of junk at 12

tonnes

showed a steady decline during the years 2000-2015 and reduced it adequately to about 9

tonnes

In contrast

to the other

Correct your spelling

two

show examples

companies

Company

C started with the lowest

waste

in 2000 at about 4

tonnes

but since

then

has

showed

Change the verb form

shown

show examples

an incline till the year 2015

with

Change preposition

apply

show examples

producing more than twice the amount of junk it started with at about 10

tonnes

To conclude

Companies

A and

showed a decline in

waste

production

while

Company

C showed an incline.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

177 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

trend
fluctuation
significant changes
increase
decrease
waste production
period
compare
analyze
main features
highlight
decline
rise
steady
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