The bar chart below shows the top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the

highest

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ten countries for the producing and consuming of

electricity

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in 2014, with the data measured in billion kWh.

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, it is evident that the

electricity

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production was higher than its consumption in every

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unless

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for Germany. In terms of the highest

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usage, China accounted for 5,322

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producing 5,398.

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number was followed by the United States with 4,099 production and 3,866 consumption.

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Rusia

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as one of the biggest

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country

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witnessed a significant decline, the

country

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only produced 1,057 and consumed 1,038. Regarding the smallest

electricity

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production, Korea

consituted

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at 448.1 with 449.5 energy used. Germany in the second position from the bottom experienced an overload consumption with 582.5

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the

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only

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526.6.

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, Brazil and France had

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situation, they produced 561.2, and 530.7

electricity

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and consumed 462.9 and 455.8,

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respectively

. The

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countries that had

average

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number were Canada, India, and Japan.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

155 words

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