The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting themain features, and make comparisons whererelevant.Write at least 150 words.
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The graph illustrates the rates of household usage for washing
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
computer
, Fix the agreement mistake
computers
phone
, Fix the agreement mistake
phones
internet
, and DVD
player
in the United States between 1995 and 1999, with the data measured in percentages. Fix the agreement mistake
players
Overall
, it is evident that all of the households
technology was increased throughout the period.
In terms of the highest utility, washing Change noun form
household's
households'
machine
stood at 60% in 1995. Fix the agreement mistake
machines
This
proportion witnessed a slight growth until reach
Wrong verb form
reached
peak
Correct article usage
a peak
to
80% in 1999. Change preposition
of
Furthermore
, the percentages was
followed by Unnecessary verb
apply
computer
began at 40% in 1995. Fix the agreement mistake
computers
While
the computer rose moderately to 30% in 1999, the phone that
started at around 18% in 1995 overtook the number with Correct pronoun usage
which
significant
gain at 75% in 1999.
Regarding the smallest household used, Correct article usage
a significant
DVD
player
and Fix the agreement mistake
players
internet
opened at 25% and 10%, respectively. The Capitalize word
Internet
DVD
player
slowed down the rate to 12% and internet
stepped up to 20% in 1996. Both of them experienced a similar uptrend before became wider to 50% for Correct article usage
the internet
Correct article usage
the internet
internet
and 40% for Capitalize word
Internet
DVD
player
in 1999.Fix the agreement mistake
players
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, dvd, player with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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