The map shows the village of Chorleywood showing development between 1868 and 1994. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the village of Chorleywood showing development between 1868 and 1994. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates the growth of a village named
Chorleywood
from 1868 to 1994. Over the 126-year period, it is evident that
this
village expanded significantly.
Additionally
, the variety of transportation options available to local residents increased, which
further
facilitated its growth. From 1868 to 1883,
Chorleywood
initially
occupied only a small area adjacent to one of the main roads. Directly across from
this
early settlement was the
Chorleywood
Park and Golf Course.
However
, between 1883 and 1992, the community began to expand southwest along the main road. The construction of a west-east railway in 1909,
along with
the establishment of
Chorleywood
station, played a crucial role in driving
further
expansion, particularly to the south side of the railway tracks. In the following decades, specifically from 1970 to 1994, a north-south motorway was constructed to the east, encouraging
further
development in that direction.
As a result
, five new developments emerged, strategically located at the intersections of the main road with the motorway, and where the railway crossed the motorway.
This
enhanced network of transportation options undoubtedly contributed to the continued growth and development of
Chorleywood
.
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