The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.
The given table represents the number of population from four different countries in 2003 and projected
statistic
in 2025 and 2050, indicated in million Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
peoples
.
Fix the agreement mistake
people
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that the population figures from Indonesia and Argentina
experienced an upward trend, whereas
that of from
Italy underwent a downward trend. Change preposition
apply
However
, it is interesting to note that Republic
of Correct article usage
the Republic
Korea
Change noun form
Korea's
populations
remain stable throughout the given time frame.
In 2003, at 238, Indonesia Fix the agreement mistake
population
has
the highest citizens among all nations, followed by, Italy at 54, Korea at 48, and Wrong verb form
had
Argentina
at 34. Additionally
, in 2025, Indonesians still outnumbered the other three countries at 274, while
there were some changes in the bottom ranking of no more than 52. A more
closer look at the table Change the word
apply
represent
that Verb problem
shows
Argentina
increased 14
Change preposition
by 14
peoples
which Fix the agreement mistake
people
roughly
Add a missing verb
is roughly
about
twofolded of the rise in Change preposition
apply
korea
with Change the capitalization
Korea
the
rise of 6 million people.
In regards Correct article usage
a
with
2050, Change preposition
to
Indonesia
Change noun form
Indonesia's
populations
reached its peak at 312, Fix the agreement mistake
population
Correct word choice
and Italy
Italy
figures show a reverse trend where it Change noun form
Italy's
plummet
to 45. Surprisingly, Wrong verb form
plummeted
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
Argentina
residents rose dramatically to 62, the
number of Correct word choice
and the
koreans
Change the capitalization
Koreans
remain
the same as it was in 25-years ago at 52.Correct subject-verb agreement
remains
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