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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. (rewrite)

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. (rewrite)
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The table illustrates
population
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 figures for Argentina, Indonesia, Italy, and the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 for the year 2003, with projections for 2025 and 2050, expressed in millions.
Overall
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, Indonesia and Argentina are expected to see a steady increase in
population
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 over the given period,
while
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 Italy’s
population
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 is projected to decrease.
In contrast
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, the
population
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 of the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 is anticipated to remain stable from 2025 onward. In 2003, Indonesia had the largest
population
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 at 238
million
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, followed by Italy with 54
million
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, the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 with 48
million
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, and Argentina with 34
million
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. By 2025, Indonesia’s
population
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 is expected to grow to 274
million
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, maintaining its position as the most populous of the four countries. Argentina’s
population
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 is forecast to increase to 48
million
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, surpassing Italy, which is expected to decline to 47
million
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. Meanwhile, the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 is predicted to grow slightly to 52
million
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. Looking ahead to 2050, Indonesia’s
population
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 is projected to reach 312
million
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, the highest among the countries. Argentina’s
population
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 is expected to continue its upward trajectory, reaching 62
million
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. Italy,
however
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, is forecast to decline
further
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 to 45
million
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,
while
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 the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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’s
population
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 is predicted to remain unchanged at 52
million
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, republic, korea, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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