WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the
process
by which coal is used to produce
electricity
. The
process
begins with the extraction of coal, which is
then
crushed into smaller pieces. The crushed coal is transported to a gasifier, where it is converted into
gas
through a heating
process
.
This
gas
then
undergoes a series of steps before it is
finally
used to generate
electricity
. After gasification, the produced
gas
is cooled, during which waste heat is released. The cooled
gas
is
then
cleaned to remove impurities. Following the cleaning
process
, the
gas
is directed to a
gas
power plant, where it is used to produce
electricity
. In
this
stage, additional waste heat is generated as a byproduct. The
electricity
generated is
then
supplied to various facilities. In summary, the diagram demonstrates a multi-step
process
of converting coal into
electricity
, involving crushing, gasification, cooling, cleaning, and the final generation of
electricity
in a
gas
power plant.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, electricity, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • hopper
  • pulverizing mill
  • combustion
  • boiler
  • steam
  • turbine
  • generator
  • mechanical energy
  • electrical energy
  • transmitted
  • power lines
  • efficiency
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