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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph above illustrates the
waste
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 production of
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company
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companies
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 A, B and C between 2000 and 2015, calculated in
tonnes
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.
Company
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 A produced the most amount of
waste
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 in 2000 at 12
tonnes
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, followed by a gentle descent over the years to less than 9
tonnes
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 of
waste
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 produced in 2015. About 8
tonnes
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 of
waste
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has been
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 produced by
company
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 B in 2000, with more
waste
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was
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 produced in 2005 at roughly 10
tonnes
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. After that, the amount of
waste
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 from
company
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 B
has
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dropped dramatically to just 3
tonnes
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 in 2015, producing the least amount of
waste
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 among its competitors.
Company
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 C produced less
waste
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then
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 the other companies in 2000 with only 4
tonnes
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 of
waste
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disposed
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.
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, the graph indicates a significant rise
of
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waste
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 production by
company
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 C, bypassing its counterparts after 2010 to around 10
tonnes
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 of
waste
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 produced in 2015.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, company, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • significant changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • waste production
  • period
  • compare
  • analyze
  • main features
  • highlight
  • decline
  • rise
  • steady
  • variations
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