The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the rates of population growth by ages 0-14, 25-37, 38-45, and over 65 between 1950 and 2050, with the data measured in percentages.
Overall
, it is evident that people with
age
over 65 and 25-37 declined,
while
0-14 and 38-45 increased. In terms of the highest percentage, elders stood at 60% in 1950. It reached a peak at 70% in 1990 before
returned
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to
initial
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value in 2010 and
decreased
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to 55% in 2050.
This
proportion was followed by adults
with
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aged
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age
38-45 began at around 22% in 1950.
Moreover
, people in
this
group
witnessed a gradual rise to 45% and fell by 5%
in
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at
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the end of the period. Regarding the remaining
age
group
, teenagers and kids started at 20% and 5%, respectively.
Furthermore
, both of those
age
group
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groups
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had different
trend
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. The 25-37
group
experienced a moderate fall to 0% in 2050. Meanwhile, the 0-14
group
rose to 20% in 2050.
This
group
met their point at 10% in 2000.
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