The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
The line graph illustrates the weekly
consumption
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of
fish
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and different types of meat including
chicken
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,
beef
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and lamb per person in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
Overall
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,
chicken
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consumption
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increased steadily and became the most popular meat over the period,
while
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the figure for
beef
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, lamb and
fish
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decreased.
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,
fish
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remained the least consumed protein source throughout the years. In 1979,
beef
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consumption
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per person per week
the
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highest of the four foods, at around 220
grams
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per person per week. It peaked at about 240
grams
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in 1983 before falling to 110
grams
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in 2004.
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, lamb
consumption
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dropped continuously from approximately 150
grams
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in 1979 to around 60
grams
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in 2004.
Chicken
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consumption
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rose sharply. Starting at roughly 140
grams
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in 1979, it overtook
beef
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around 1988.
Chicken
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have
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become the most consumed meat
reached
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approximately 250
grams
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in 2004.
While
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,
fish
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consumption
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remained relatively stable, beginning at 60
grams
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in 1979 and declining to about 40
grams
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in 2004.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fish, chicken, beef, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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