The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
The line chart illustrates the
amount
of fish
and three types of meat for each person consumed every week in a country of
Europe from 1979 to 2004.
In general, there was a significant change Change preposition
in
consumption
of different kinds of meat. Change preposition
in consumption
In addition
, having fish
for meals was always the lowest amount
in the country.
It can be clearly seen that in 1979, grams
of beef stood at the highest data, nearly 220 grams
. The figures fluctuated before reaching a peak of about 240 grams
in 1983. And after that
it decreased sharply by approximately 110 Add a comma
that,
grams
compared to the first period
. Similarly
, the consumption of lamb fell strongly from 150 grams
to around 65 grams
during the period
.
Turning to the
chicken and Correct article usage
apply
fish
consumption, at the first of the period
, people in the
European Correct article usage
apply
country
have nearly 140 Fix the agreement mistake
countries
grams
of chicken. Then
the amount
chicken’s
figures continued to rise dramatically and became the highest proportion after the year 1989 to the end of the Change preposition
of chicken’s
period
. Compared to the amount
of fish
, the data decreased slightly from around 60 grams
to roughly 40 grams
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