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The table below shows the results of a survey of first-year students taking various courses at a particular university. It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of their course ‘very good’.

The table below shows the results of a survey of first-year students taking various courses at a particular university. It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of their course ‘very good’.
#results #survey #students #courses #university #aspects #course #‘very #good’
The table drew the conclusion
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 a survey of different types of courses in specific
University
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Universities
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 that belongs to
first year
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first-year
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 students from 2000 to 2010.
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increase
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an increase
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 in percentage throughout the whole other programs.
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resoures
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resources
 rise over
tan
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ten
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 years from 84 to 88. Teaching
facllities
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facilities
faculties
comes
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come
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 as the second
favorable
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 lesson ,
that
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 remained stable from 2000 to 2010 with 77.Teaching
facllities
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facilities
is
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 followed by electronic resources that dramatically
increases
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increase
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 over
the
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apply
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time periods. Turing to the lower proportion of good
feedbacks
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,
range
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the range
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 of modules offered the lowest preferable module
that
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fall
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 gradually from 32 in 2000 to 27 in 2010.
lastly
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slight difference between the years,had a dramatic rise in 2005 which is exercised by 69.
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