The pie charts below show the expenditure of the people of a country on different activities in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts
illustrates
the data on Change the verb form
illustrate
expenditure
in an unknown country on a variety of activities in two different years of
2000 and 2010. The unit of measurement is percentage.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, travelling and education accounted the
major proportion in terms of Change preposition
for the
expenditure
. Whereas
, people spent the least on footwear and clothing.
In 2000, the highest expenditure
was education a total figure or
34%, followed by travelling which accounted for 25%. Correct your spelling
of
However
, in the year 2010, the expenditure
on travelling was
increased by 35%, Unnecessary verb
apply
whereas
, the money being spent on education was only 20%.
The proportion of money spent on health was same
in both Correct article usage
the same
the
years with a consistent figure of 15%, Correct article usage
apply
as well as
the expenditure
of
Restaurants and Hotels Change preposition
on
were
increased from 16% in 2000 to 17% in 2010. Unnecessary verb
apply
On the other hand
, Footwear and clothing were not a major part of the expenditure
, with a 10% of
portion in 2000 and 13% by 2010.Change preposition
apply
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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