The chart below shows the percentage of female members of parliament in 5 European countries from 2000 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart illustrates the proportion of female parliament members
of
five countries in Europe between 2000 and 2012.
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in
Overall
, it can be clearly see
that Germany started Change the verb form
be clearly seen
by
the highest rates of women Change preposition
with
parliament
in 2000, Change preposition
in parliament
while
Italy ending
by the largest degree in 2012.
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ended
To begin
, in 2000 Germany had the highest proportion of female members around 33%, followed by Italy France and Belgium about 27% 25% 27% respectively. The rates
of women in Fix the agreement mistake
rate
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was merely about 3%. Turning to Germany which had the same patterns of Correct your spelling
UK
increased
from 2000 to 2008 around 35%, Replace the word
increase
then
, it had
slowly rose from 2008 to 2012 Unnecessary verb
apply
approximately
37%.
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On the other hand
, approximately 25% of members in France’s parliament were women, with a subsequent jump to reach a peak of around 37% in 2004 and a final increase from 30% in 2008 to 32% in 2012. Meanwhile, the figure for Belgium increased from 17% in 2000 to 28% in 2000 and levelled off towards the end of the period.Submitted by khulood.92 on
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