The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

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The chart provides key information about the climate and the amount of rainfall in city located in the est region of Africa, and the units are measured in degrees and millimeters respectively.

Overall

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, it is clear from the graph that April by far has witnessed more rain than any other month.

In addition

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, July has seen the least amount of rain ,

by contrast

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, it was the hottest month of the year.

According to

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what is shown in the graph, it can be said that

rainfall

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the rainfall

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rate goes in parallel with the climate degrees. An exception of that would be the third month . Despite the highest temperature degree, March experienced a little amount of rain with approximately 100 millimeters. When it comes to October,November, and May,it can be said that they experienced the same ranking with respect to the two variables.

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, the rest of the months were the least ranking with

proportion

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a proportion

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range

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ranging

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from

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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