You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter:
• Introduce yourself
• Say why you are interested in this club
• Ask some questions about the club ,facilities, members, costs.
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task achievement
Include all parts of the task: why you are interested in the club and questions about the club’s facilities, members, and costs.
coherence cohesion
Use paragraphs to organize your letter. For example, one for introducing yourself, one for why you are interested in the club, and another for your questions.
suitable writing tone
Correct some of the grammatical errors, such as 'for get' to 'to get' and 'my name us' to 'my name is'.
task achievement
Clear introduction of yourself and the issue you are facing.
coherence cohesion
Appropriate greeting and clear recognition of the recipient.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
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