You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter:
• Introduce yourself
• Say why you are interested in this club
• Ask some questions about the club ,facilities, members, costs.
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task achievement
Include all parts of the task: why you are interested in the club and questions about the club’s facilities, members, and costs.
coherence cohesion
Use paragraphs to organize your letter. For example, one for introducing yourself, one for why you are interested in the club, and another for your questions.
suitable writing tone
Correct some of the grammatical errors, such as 'for get' to 'to get' and 'my name us' to 'my name is'.
task achievement
Clear introduction of yourself and the issue you are facing.
coherence cohesion
Appropriate greeting and clear recognition of the recipient.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
I am writing this letter to seek your permission to reduce my working hours since I wish to study business management at my local college. It is a one-time opportunity as I have received a scholarship.
In the contemporary era, with the evolving social landscape, people have acquired numerous personal properties such as laptops, motorcycles, and technological products. Therefore, some people assert that this desire-oriented trend leads individuals to lack consciousness of genuine personality traits (e.g., kindness and concern). From my perspective, I agree with this viewpoint.
The debate over the primary aim of science often centers on whether it should focus solely on improving people's lives. While I agree that enhancing human well-being is a significant objective of scientific inquiry, I believe that the pursuit of knowledge itself and the exploration of the natural world are equally important aims.