The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. (21/08)

The following diagram illustrates how carbonated drinks

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manufactured, starting with cleaning and culminating with packaging before distributing to numerous markets.

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, it can be clearly observed that there are five main stages:

water

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cleaning, heating and carbonation, mixing, filtering and filling, and packaging as

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final steps.

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, it is interesting to note that the process of creating

such

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popular drinks is simple yet sophisticated.

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with, the raw

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which is our main ingredient underwent

through

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apply

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both physical and chemical cleaning

process

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processes

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first. By flowing through

filter

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the filter

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to remove any large impurities,

this

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filtered

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processed

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with

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water

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softener and chemicals to improve better

tastes

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and smell.

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, the carbonation begins once clean

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is pumped toward the electric heater which

heating

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up the

water

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and later

cool

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cools

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down

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while

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goes along

cooling

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the cooling

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pipe. A large tank full

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cardon

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carbon

dioxide awaited to fuse with cooler

water

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making it become carbonated

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.

Next,

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the

by products

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from heating and carbonating

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to a gigantic mixing tank for colour and flavour adjustments. Once,

mixed

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all the colouring, syrup, and flavour well, it will

further

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to the

last

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step before selling which is filtering and filling. In

this

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stage, the filter drinks now fill up in either bottles or cans and

packed

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in

a large carton boxes

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a large carton box

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.

Lastly

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, these packages will be distributed

toward

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supermarkets by lorries or trucks.