The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. ielts-academic-task-1-coffee-shop-sales Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table illustrates how many
coffee
, tea
, pastries, and sandwiches that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
coffee
shop
Fix the agreement mistake
shops
made
in an office building Wrong verb form
make
on
Change preposition
over
a
course of Correct article usage
the
week
, with the data measured in numbers. Add an article
the week
a week
Overall
, it is evident that coffee
is the most favourite dish by total number, while
tea
is the most unpopular.
In terms of the
Correct article usage
apply
coffee
, it has the biggest sales at 265 in the morning. This
number followed
by people who buy Add a missing verb
is followed
coffee
from 5.30 to 8.30 with 200 cups has
made. In the afternoon session, the portion Unnecessary verb
apply
decrease
slightly to around 145-185. Change the verb form
decreases
Moreover
, the other menu that people most order is pastries with 275 pieces in 7.30-10.30 and 150 pieces in 2.30-5.30, respectively.
Regarding the fewest buyer
, only 35 cups of Fix the agreement mistake
buyers
tea
sold in 2.30-5.30. Coversely
, Correct your spelling
Conversely
in
7.30-10.30, the Change preposition
from
coffee
shop
sell
110 cups of Change the verb form
sells
tea
. Sandwiches also
unpopular in the Add a missing verb
are also
coffee
shop
, the shop
make
around 40-50 sales in 7.30-10.30 and 2.30-5.30. Change the verb form
makes
However
, there are a lot of people that buy this
food for lunch with 200 sales has
made.Unnecessary verb
apply
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