Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 2

The map illustrates two potential locations (S1 and S2) for a new shopping mall in the city

Brandfield

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of Brandfield

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.

Overall

, it is apparent that the main difference between

two

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the two

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sites is that S1 is located on the east

side

and S2 on the

west

side

of the map. The sites can

also

be compared in terms of access by

road

,

river

or rail, and their positions relative to four areas. Looking at the information in more detail,

housing

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the housing

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estate

located

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is located

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on the north

side

,

a

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with a

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golf course and

park

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a park

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on the

west

side

. S1 is close to the city centre, housing estate,

river

and

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apply

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golf course and park.

However

, it is far from the railway which

is cross

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crosses

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the area from the southern east to the northern

west

.

Also

, it is far from the

road

which forms a circle around the city centre and ends in the northern

west

. There is a

river

from the north to the

southern

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southern-west

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west

side

.

It is clear that

a

river

is far from the S2.

By

contrast

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contrast,

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S2 lies on the

road

and railway

road

.

Moreover

, S2 is near the industrial estate which is located on the

west

side

of the map.