Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 2
The map illustrates two potential locations (S1 and S2) for a new shopping mall in the city
Brandfield
.
Change preposition
of Brandfield
Overall
, it is apparent that the main difference between two
sites is that S1 is located on the east Correct article usage
the two
side
and S2 on the west
side
of the map. The sites can also
be compared in terms of access by road
, river
or rail, and their positions relative to four areas.
Looking at the information in more detail, housing
estate Correct article usage
the housing
located
on the north Add a missing verb
is located
side
, a
golf course and Change preposition
with a
park
on the Correct article usage
a park
west
side
. S1 is close to the city centre, housing estate, river
and
golf course and park. Correct word choice
apply
However
, it is far from the railway which is cross
the area from the southern east to the northern Wrong verb form
crosses
west
. Also
, it is far from the road
which forms a circle around the city centre and ends in the northern west
.
There is a river
from the north to the southern
Add a hyphen
southern-west
west
side
. It is clear that
a river
is far from the S2. By
contrast
S2 lies on the Add a comma
contrast,
road
and railway road
. Moreover
, S2 is near the industrial estate which is located on the west
side
of the map.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words side, west, road, river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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