The Chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.
the chart shows the average
number
of females who delivered their first
baby in a family in Australia in three years
.
overall
, the highest number
of women
who gave delivery to their first
children came under the age of 19 -24, while
some females over 40 had the least parturition in three years
.
in detail, women
under 19-24 gave birth to their first
baby with shares at 33 % in 1986, and this
number
plummeted to 20 % after 20 years
. Unfortunately, this
ratio declined to nearly 10 in the final year. following
this
, the highest number
of women
had come for parturition to first
born
at 60% and its peak in 1966, surprisingly Verb problem
apply
this
number
took a nose dive to 35% in 1986 and continuously plunged to 29% in 2006. Moreover
, in the category of 25 to 35, around 35% of females born their first
child in 1966 and this
ratio gradually inclined at
50% after 20 Change preposition
to
years
but this
value plunged to approximately 30% in 2006.
Furthermore
, in 1966 around 11% of women
birthing their first
child and this
number
had significant changes and surged to more than 40% between ages 30 to 34 in 2006. Next, the aged 34 to 39 and over 40 women
got pregnant first
time with shares at below 10 % in 1966. Still, women
who came in 34 to 39 gave delivery for the first
time increased to 30% after 40 years
, but those who were above 40 had no significant numbers in birthing.Submitted by elbayevazamat on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, first, years, women with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "gave" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "plunged" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
▼