The Chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.
the chart shows the average
number
of females who delivered their Use synonyms
first
baby in a family in Australia in three Use synonyms
years
.
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overall
, the highest Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
women
who gave delivery to their Use synonyms
first
children came under the age of 19 -24, Use synonyms
while
some females over 40 had the least parturition in three Linking Words
years
.
in detail, Use synonyms
women
under 19-24 gave birth to their Use synonyms
first
baby with shares at 33 % in 1986, and Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
number
plummeted to 20 % after 20 Use synonyms
years
. Unfortunately, Use synonyms
this
ratio declined to nearly 10 in the final year. Linking Words
following
Linking Words
this
, the highest Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
women
had come for parturition to Use synonyms
first
Use synonyms
born
at 60% and its peak in 1966, surprisingly Verb problem
apply
this
Linking Words
number
took a nose dive to 35% in 1986 and continuously plunged to 29% in 2006. Use synonyms
Moreover
, in the category of 25 to 35, around 35% of females born their Linking Words
first
child in 1966 and Use synonyms
this
ratio gradually inclined Linking Words
at
50% after 20 Change preposition
to
years
but Use synonyms
this
value plunged to approximately 30% in 2006.
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Furthermore
, in 1966 around 11% of Linking Words
women
birthing their Use synonyms
first
child and Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
number
had significant changes and surged to more than 40% between ages 30 to 34 in 2006. Next, the aged 34 to 39 and over 40 Use synonyms
women
got pregnant Use synonyms
first
time with shares at below 10 % in 1966. Still, Use synonyms
women
who came in 34 to 39 gave delivery for the Use synonyms
first
time increased to 30% after 40 Use synonyms
years
, but those who were above 40 had no significant numbers in birthing.Use synonyms
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