The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The previous bar chart showcases the average yearly earnings in percentages in
cities
and regional areas around Australia.
Overall
, the majority of
people
in
cities
earned a
middle
salary
while
most of the
people
in regional centres had a lower
middle
income.
In contrast
, the least amount of
people
in
cities
had a low income,
whereas
the least proportion of individuals in regional areas got a high
salary
. In detail, it can be clearly seen that around
cities
most
people
(around 35%) tended to have a
middle
salary
, followed by a lower
middle
(around 30%) and a high
salary
(around 20%).
However
, in regional areas the situation was different. The lower
middle
salary
was earned by the majority of the
people
(around 34%), followed by a smaller amount of
people
earning a
middle
and low
salary
. Contrarily, the least number of
people
in
cities
(around 13%) got a low
salary
while
around regional centres the high
salary
was earned by the lowest number of
people
(around 15%).
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