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The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The previous pie charts illustrate the
exports
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 made between two countries (The
USA
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 and
Vietnam
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).
Overall
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, in the
exports
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 made from
Vietnam
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 to The
USA
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, coffee was mostly exported
while
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 garments and other
products
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 were the least.
On the other hand
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,
Aircrafts
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aircraft
 parts were the highest sold from The
USA
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 to
Vietnam
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while
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 cars were the lowest. It's important to note that the
products
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 exported were more expensive from The
USA
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 to
Vietnam
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 than from
Vietnam
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 to The
USA
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. On
one
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the one
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 hand, it can be clearly seen that coffee was the most popular product sold from
Vietnam
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 to The
USA
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 with around 23
million
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 dollars, followed by fruit and vegetables (16
million
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)
whereas
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 the
products
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 with the least popularity were
the
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apply
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garments and others with only 2
million
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.
On the other hand
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, in
exports
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 from The
USA
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 to
Vietnam
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, aircraft parts were the most popular with approximately 72
million
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 dollars, followed by others (35
million
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) and machinery (30.5
million
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). Cars were the least exported with just 6
million
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 dollars. It's important to highlight the
exports
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 made from The
USA
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 to
Vietnam
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 had a higher cost than the
products
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 exported from
Vietnam
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 to The
USA
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand, while".
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, usa, vietnam, products, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • import/export balance
  • sector
  • percentage
  • relative importance
  • comparative analysis
  • similarities and differences
  • noteworthy
  • primary sector
  • secondary sector
  • contribute
  • overall export profile
  • main features
  • summarize
  • context
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