The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The previous pie charts illustrate the
exports
made between two countries (The USA
and Vietnam
).
Overall
, in the exports
made from Vietnam
to The USA
, coffee was mostly exported while
garments and other products
were the least. On the other hand
, Aircrafts
parts were the highest sold from The Correct your spelling
aircraft
USA
to Vietnam
while
cars were the lowest. It's important to note that the products
exported were more expensive from The USA
to Vietnam
than from Vietnam
to The USA
.
On one
hand, it can be clearly seen that coffee was the most popular product sold from Correct article usage
the one
Vietnam
to The USA
with around 23 million
dollars, followed by fruit and vegetables (16 million
) whereas
the products
with the least popularity were the
garments and others with only 2 Correct article usage
apply
million
.
On the other hand
, in exports
from The USA
to Vietnam
, aircraft parts were the most popular with approximately 72 million
dollars, followed by others (35 million
) and machinery (30.5 million
). Cars were the least exported with just 6 million
dollars.
It's important to highlight the exports
made from The USA
to Vietnam
had a higher cost than the products
exported from Vietnam
to The USA
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