The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The previous pie charts illustrate the
exports
made between two countries (The
USA
and
Vietnam
).
Overall
, in the
exports
made from
Vietnam
to The
USA
, coffee was mostly exported
while
garments and other
products
were the least.
On the other hand
,
Aircrafts
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aircraft
parts were the highest sold from The
USA
to
Vietnam
while
cars were the lowest. It's important to note that the
products
exported were more expensive from The
USA
to
Vietnam
than from
Vietnam
to The
USA
. On
one
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the one
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hand, it can be clearly seen that coffee was the most popular product sold from
Vietnam
to The
USA
with around 23
million
dollars, followed by fruit and vegetables (16
million
)
whereas
the
products
with the least popularity were
the
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garments and others with only 2
million
.
On the other hand
, in
exports
from The
USA
to
Vietnam
, aircraft parts were the most popular with approximately 72
million
dollars, followed by others (35
million
) and machinery (30.5
million
). Cars were the least exported with just 6
million
dollars. It's important to highlight the
exports
made from The
USA
to
Vietnam
had a higher cost than the
products
exported from
Vietnam
to The
USA
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, usa, vietnam, products, million with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • import/export balance
  • sector
  • percentage
  • relative importance
  • comparative analysis
  • similarities and differences
  • noteworthy
  • primary sector
  • secondary sector
  • contribute
  • overall export profile
  • main features
  • summarize
  • context
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