The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
report derives from the listed chart which enumerates the process of how leather products are made.
A glance at the chart reveals that the 11-step process commences with evaporating an animal Linking Words
skin
and terminates with goods that are manufactured from leather. Use synonyms
This
is achieved by soaking an animal Linking Words
skin
in specialized tanks with different supplements for few times Use synonyms
along with
flattering and polishing afterwards.
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To begin
with, an animal's Linking Words
skin
needs to be dried Use synonyms
then
it is transported to a processing plant via lorries. The 4th step covers putting animal Linking Words
skin
into a tank with a mix of water and lime followed by soaking in another reservoir with the lime only.
In the subsequent stage, the Use synonyms
skin
has undergone the process of flattering, including massive and small rollers Use synonyms
while
the 7th stage requires putting the Linking Words
skin
into a tank again but with a Tannin, water, and Vegetable matter for soaking purposes. In stark contrast to the 8th stage which involves a burnishing method, the 9th step embraces compiling and transporting manufactured material by lorries to a factory. Use synonyms
Last
but not least, transported material is turned into leather goods Linking Words
such
as purses, shoes, and sports equipment.Linking Words
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