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The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book.

The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book.
#stages #book
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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The diagram illustrates different stages in the process of publishing a
book
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 from writing to
distribution
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distributing
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 the ready
books
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 to readers. At the beginning, the story or content is selected,
the
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and the
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 writing is created and submitted to
publishing
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the publishing
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 house for review.
Then
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 in
publishing
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the publishing
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 house the whole text was carefully studied by the editors to identify the errors or make changes. Having finalized the editing stage, the contract is signed with
publishing
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 house to design the frame of the material. Over the course of the next stage, the design and layout of the
book
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 are completed, and the final version is sent
to
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 printing. Once the printing
is culminated
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culminates
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, the pages of
books
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 are checked in the correct order and the
books
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 are sent to
binding
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the binding
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.
Subsequently
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, the
books
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 are covered and the author’s name, the title of the
book
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 and other details are stated
in
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on
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 the cover of the
book
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.
Finally
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, the ready
books
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 are sent to bookshops for sale.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words book, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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