The diagram demonstrates monthly sales of vacuum cleaners by brand name in five prominent cities of Canada, in thousands of units. Summarize the given information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
given
bar chart illustrates data about monthly Verb problem
apply
sales
of vacuum cleaners by its company in five eminent cities of Canada, in thousands of units. At the
first glance, the most distinguished is Correct article usage
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dyson
and Change the capitalization
Dyson
last
two ones roughly depict negligible Correct article usage
the last
sale
.
Regarding the most popular brand, which is Fix the agreement mistake
sales
dyson
, it shows its high point in Calgary and Ottawa demonstrating about 1150000 and 1100000, correspondingly. Change the capitalization
Dyson
Moreover
, it was sold approximately for
550 Change preposition
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thousand
times in Vancouver and also
in Montreal, samely.
Considering electrolux
company, even though it is not Change the capitalization
Electrolux
renowned
as Rephrase
as renowned
Dyson
, it seems as second famous brand representing its highest point it
Vancouver which is almost Correct your spelling
in
popular
as Rephrase
as popular
Dyson
in that city for
about 540 Change preposition
with
thousand
sales
. Related to the rest of the cities
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city's
cities'
sales
of electrolux
, it conveys between 250 and 150 which seems Change the capitalization
Electrolux
as
insignificant.
The Change preposition
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last
brand which is considered as
the least well-known is Change preposition
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edmonton
which had its highest point in Vancouver and Montreal showing just above 300 Change the capitalization
Edmonton
thousand
and just below 300 thousand
, respectively. Dealing with last
3 cities, three of them have negligible Correct article usage
the last
sales
accounting for about 50 thousand
.Correct your spelling
50,000
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