The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The line chart below displays data about the
percentage
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of cities population in the
Philippines
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, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia from 1970 until 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. In 1970, the population of the
Philippines
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and Malaysia had the highest rank. respectively 31 and 30%. But during the years the
percentage
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of urbanized people in Malaysia has risen significantly. Except in 1990, the
Philippines
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had a sudden jump and got the highest record again, but
then
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decries slightly until 2010.
On the other hand
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, Thailand and Indonesia were almost in the same situation as the two other countries. In the beginning, the
percentage
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of Thailand has a slight increase.
Although
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Indonesia has familiar circumstances, but always was in the
last
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rank; until 2000 when its
percentage
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rose dramatically and even went higher than the
Philippines
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in 2010. To predict the future, we can observe that the order of ranks remains steady.
However
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, the population in all four countries will increase.
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