The graph below gives information about percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of the
population
living in urban areas in
four
Asian
countries
—namely the Philippines,
Malaysia
, Thailand, and Indonesia—between 1970 and 2020, with projections for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, the graph shows a significant upward trend in urbanization across all
four
countries
. Notably, Indonesia had the smallest proportion of its
population
living in cities in 1970,
while
Malaysia
is expected to have the highest by 2040. In 1970, Indonesia had the lowest urban
population
at nearly 15%,
while
the Philippines had the highest at just over 30%. From 1970 to 1990, all
four
countries
experienced increases in urbanization. By 1990,
Malaysia
’s urban
population
had reached around 45%, slightly below the Philippines’ 49%.
However
, between 1990 and 2000,
Malaysia
saw a substantial rise of 17%,
while
the proportion in the Philippines declined by 4%. The data
also
predict that from 2020 onward,
Malaysia
will surpass the other
countries
in urban
population
percentage, reaching over 80% by 2040.
In contrast
, Indonesia’s urban
population
will grow steadily, but it will still remain the lowest among the
four
countries
by 2040. By that time, the urban
population
of
Malaysia
is expected to be almost double that of Thailand and Indonesia.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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