The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart demonstrates the
number
of people
engaging in distinct activities at a social center
in Melbourne, Australia, between 2000 and 2020. Generally, the film club was the most popular activity, Change the spelling
centre
whereas
musical shows were the least favorable
attention from the community in the city over the period shown. Change the spelling
favourable
Nonetheless
, the latter experienced the fastest growth rate in the number
of attendance.
From 2000 to 2020, the movie club had the highest number
of participants
, which fluctuated around 65 people
. Similarly
, the figure for martial arts was relatively stable, waving about 35 people
. Regarding amateur dramatics, the number
of participants
started at nearly 25 people
in 2000 and it grew by 5 people
in the next 5 years. Since then
, the figure dropped constantly and reached under 10 people
in 2020.
Over the course of 5 years, starting from 2000, the number
of participants
in table tennis activity was about 25. Then
, it decreased slightly by 5 people
in 2010. Nevertheless
, it rose considerably in 2015 and peaked at over 50 people
in 2020. Noticeably, there was no data for musical shows between 2000 and 2005. However
, starting in 2005, this
activity welcomed the first participants
. In the following five years, it had about 10 people
and kept growing to 15 people
in 2020.Submitted by Mads on
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