The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The graph shows how the population of four Asian
countires
have changed since 1970 and how they will change in the future.
In 1970, there were more people living Correct your spelling
countries
cities
in Change preposition
in cities
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Philippines
and Correct article usage
the Philippines
Malaysia
than Use synonyms
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Thailand
and Change preposition
in Thailand
Indonesia
. The Use synonyms
ratio
of Use synonyms
Philippines
and Use synonyms
Malaysia
who live in cities was 30% percentage, Use synonyms
while
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citizens
Thailand
and Use synonyms
Indonesia
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approxemitaley
15% and 18% percent relatively. Between 1970 and the present, there Correct your spelling
approximately
have
been Correct subject-verb agreement
has
10
% per cent rise in the number of Correct article usage
a 10
Philippines
, Use synonyms
Thailand
and Use synonyms
Indonesia
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citizien
who live in cities.
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citizens
citizen
According to
the graph, the Linking Words
ratio
of urban people in Use synonyms
Malaysia
will increase more quickly than Use synonyms
other
three countries, and experts say that by 2030, four countries have different Correct article usage
the other
percentage
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percentages
Malaysia
80%, Use synonyms
Indonesia
60%, Use synonyms
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Philippines
50% and Correct article usage
the Philippines
Thailand
40%. By 2040, Use synonyms
four
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the four
countires
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countries
counties
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ratio
will rise slightly and peak.
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ratios
Thus
, over the Linking Words
70- year
period, Correct your spelling
70-year
Malaysia
is going to experience steady growth in its urban people and it will overtake three countries. Use synonyms
On the other hand
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the Philippines
Philippines
population will peak in 2040 but the percentage of Change noun form
Philippine's
Philippines'
citizien
will stand in third place.Correct your spelling
citizen
citizens
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