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The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one are of Britain. The police shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisions where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one are of Britain. The police shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The provided data depicts how the
police
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 budget was structured showing the earnings and expenses in a particular area of the UK in 2017 and 2018.
Overall
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, the National Government funded the most
money
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 for the
police
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 and the table illustrates that they received a bigger amount of financial aid in 2018.
Although
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 the
money
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 was spent
similarly
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 in both years, the proportion of funds spent on technology almost doubled over the year.
According to
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 the table, the
police
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 had a higher budget in 2018. Since every source of income provided more
money
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, the total budget went up by approximately 14 million pounds,
while
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 the financial resources, received from local taxes, went up significantly, rising from 91,2 to 102,3 million pounds. Turning to the remaining statistics,
it is clear that
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 the biggest share of income is spent on salaries. Because the
police
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 spent more funds on technology in 2018 and the proportion increased by 6%, less
money
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 had to be spent on salaries.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, money with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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