You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, Complain about the situation Say why this is a problem And propose ways to reduce the noise Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’ Do not write any addresses Write at least 150 words
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Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Shay, and I am currently living in the university residence of Room 303 at Spring Hall at the University of Melbourne. I am writing concerning a disturbed condition I have been experiencing recently that usually happens late at night.
As a freshman who just started a hectic academic life, being able to fall asleep before 11 pm is a basic need for most students.
However
, the endless noises from the nearby construction sites for building new restaurants made it hard to halt in time, as the sheer amount of sensory overload was exploding in our ears.
Not only does this
issue serve as a nightmare for us, but the builders and supervisors of that building site have never admitted they are wrong at all. Especially when we pointed out a representative to reach them, they had a reluctant attitude towards us without saying anything. Instead
, they told us this
whole situation should be reported to the manager of the resident, thereby reaching out to you, which is our urgent need for solving the whole problem as soon as possible.
I hope that you can have prompt coordination for this
issue.
Yours faithfully,
Shay JonesSubmitted by shaoyuzhu08 on
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coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph contains a single idea. In some instances, multiple ideas are present which can dilute the impact of your argument.
coherence cohesion
Instead of using 'As a freshman who just started a hectic academic life,' consider rephrasing for clarity e.g., 'As a freshman who has just begun a demanding academic journey.'
task achievement
To improve task achievement, specify alternative ways the noise issue could be mitigated, like restrictions on work hours or soundproof barriers.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and respectful tone, suitable for writing to a university governor.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate and correctly formatted.