The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2012, 2014 and 2016. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2012, 2014 and 2016. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustrated table gives data about the number of beef transited in five different nations in the
years
of 2012, 2014 and 2016.
Overall
,
it is clear that
in these
years
the biggest
count
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amount
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of transited
meat
was in Brazil,
while
in Switzerland
situation
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the situation
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was
complitely
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completely
different and
smallest
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the smallest
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amount of exported
meat
was there. In accordance with a table, the largest percentage of
meat
transition was in Brazil during these
years
and the number of exported
meat
is
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was
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125,465
tonnes
in 2012, 130,307
tonnes
in 2014 and 137,650
tonnes
in 2016.
Moreover
, in
Uruguay
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Uruguay,
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export of
meat
was
on
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in
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the
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apply
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second place, but there were
flactuated
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fluctuated
changes over
this
period from 44,372
tonnes
to 39,932
tonnes
and
then
to 42,310
tonnes
.
Furthermore
, in Japan in these
years
wasn't that significant export of
meat
starting with 224
tonnes
to 633
tonnes
at the end
1,005
tonnes
,
while
in Norway
export
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the export
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of
meat
was worse compared with Japan at the beginning 34
tonnes
at the middle 81
tonnes
and
at the end
of table 17
tonnes
. Meanwhile, the least exported place was Switzerland with
number
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a number
the number
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of 23, 17 and 22
tonnes
in these
years
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, meat, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export levels
  • fluctuations
  • substantial increase/decrease
  • economic factors
  • trade policies
  • demand
  • comparative analysis
  • notable change
  • consistent trend
  • market share
  • dominant exporter
  • sharp decline/increase
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