The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2012, 2014 and 2016. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustrated table gives data about the number of beef transited in five different nations in the
years
of 2012, 2014 and 2016.
Overall
, it is clear that
in these years
the biggest count
of transited Correct your spelling
amount
meat
was in Brazil, while
in Switzerland situation
was Correct article usage
the situation
complitely
different and Correct your spelling
completely
smallest
amount of exported Correct article usage
the smallest
meat
was there.
In accordance with a table, the largest percentage of meat
transition was in Brazil during these years
and the number of exported meat
is
125,465 Wrong verb form
was
tonnes
in 2012, 130,307 tonnes
in 2014 and 137,650 tonnes
in 2016. Moreover
, in Uruguay
export of Add a comma
Uruguay,
meat
was on
Change preposition
in
the
second place, but there were Correct article usage
apply
flactuated
changes over Correct your spelling
fluctuated
this
period from 44,372 tonnes
to 39,932 tonnes
and then
to 42,310 tonnes
.
Furthermore
, in Japan in these years
wasn't that significant export of meat
starting with 224 tonnes
to 633 tonnes
at the end
1,005 tonnes
, while
in Norway export
of Correct article usage
the export
meat
was worse compared with Japan at the beginning 34 tonnes
at the middle 81 tonnes
and at the end
of table 17 tonnes
. Meanwhile, the least exported place was Switzerland with number
of 23, 17 and 22 Change the article
a number
the number
tonnes
in these years
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