Some people believe that the government should fund art and culture, while others think that it should only fund sciences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Government fund allocation is a matter which has fueled heated debate.

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it is generally agreed that

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should

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on social matters like

art

and culture, there are those who argue that the fund should be focused on sciences in general. Personally, I am inclined to support the former perspective. On the one hand, the position that major spending on science purposes can improve

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quality of life is perfectly plausible for the main reason. The most

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point is that from

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study and

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, many discoveries in

medical

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field have been found and applied to help

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many physical health issues of mankind.

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, during the

pandamic

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pandemic

period, the vaccine for Covid 19 is one of the best

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within a short time to help

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prevent and control the disease.

However

, what has been left out of their consideration is that these studies sometimes return no positive result

while

lots of money was spent and many years of study were wasted.

On the other hand

, there are convincing arguments in favour of the advantages of

art

and culture on

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and

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mental health . One obvious reason for

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is that our

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cultural

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are

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so

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diverse

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and we are spending many years in our

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to

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these cultural

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children

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generation.

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,

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spent on these reservations will

also

help the government

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the tourism business and

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market, which will

also

help in return more money for future funds. Another point of view of

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discussion is that

art

in general is a way for public member to

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their stress and improve the quality of mental health.

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,

art

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gallery can become a destination for anyone to visit in their free time and to enjoy the showcase of many pieces of

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art

from around the world.

To conclude

, a thorough discussion of

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statement copes with both angles in a broader sense. In a more personal aspect, the support lends to the more

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the fact that

although

science studies may bring many benefits to

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kinds, it is

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mission for

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to focus on

art

and culture for

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preservation

and improvement of

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society.