The diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and it anatomy.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and it anatomy.
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The illustration represents the biological cycle of ladybug and its body structure. There are 4 stages: the egg, the larva, the
pupa
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and the
adult
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.
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, the
adult
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ladybug’s anatomy is divided into 3 parts: the head, the Pronotum and the Abdomen.
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, the maximum cycle takes approximately 1 month. It tends to spend more time on the leaf. After it becomes an
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, it flies using its red elytra and wings.
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, the egg is laid on the leaf by the female ladybug.
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, the larva hatches from the egg within 2 to 5 days. At the larval stage, it takes 21 days to develop into the
Pupa
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. The
pupa
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attaches its cocoon to the leaf. 7 day later, the
pupa
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grows into an
adult
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of which a pair of antennae on its head. Not only are there the antennae, but
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a pair of wings and a pair of red elytra.
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, it has 6 legs. Afterwards, it mates and reproduces to start the cycle of a new generation of ladybugs.
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