The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.

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This

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is the map of a

town

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by the name of Garlsdon.

This

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map shows the two possible places where a supermarket can be created. The first

place

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is in the countryside area which is a little far away from houses and the

town

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centre.

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, the

second

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place

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is in the

town

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centre surrounded by industrial areas

also

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there is a railway nearby. The first

place

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is 12 km far away from Hindon where the population is 10,000

also

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it is very away from the houses of people.

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, there is a main road and a railway track that covers

this

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site.

On the other hand

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, the

second

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site is surrounded by an industrial area.It is near the area where there are many homes. It is very close to Bransdon which is only 16 km and 15000 people live there.

whereas

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Cransdon

town

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is 25 km away with a population of 29000.The

second

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site where

this

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store is being planned is located in no traffic zone because it is a city centre.People can easily approach

this

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second

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place

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because it is closer to society.

Saad KamalThu Aug 22 2024

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, place, second with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

182 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Accessibility
Congestion
Economic benefits
Environmental impact
Foot traffic
Green space
Job creation
Local property values
Parking availability
Pollution
Proximity
Public transportation
Sustainability
Traffic patterns
Residential areas
Shopping convenience

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