The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The bar graph provides information about exportation of pineapples from the three countries in two different years whilst the pie chart demonstrates various categories of the distribution of the amount made from each of the fruits to the consumer.
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country
B used to sell the highest quantity of the products in the year 2009 however
country
A improved significantly after a decade whereas
country
C remained almost steady in comparison to the former countries. In addition
, it is seen that the highest proportion of the cost
was accounted to
distribution and retail and the export costs Change preposition
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country
B was at the top,being higher by almost 3 million metric tonnes
than country
A which was about 1.5million
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1.5 million
tonnes
and country
C was even less than that.After ten years, country
A rose it's
sales by nearly Correct your spelling
its
9million
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9 million
tonnes
whereas
country
B dropped by roughly 3million
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3 million
tonnes
. As compared to these, country
C had little or no change at all.
As per the information from the second graph, the highest proportion of money which was as high as 35% , went to distribution and retail. This
price was 7times
greater Correct your spelling
7 times
to
that of the producer Change preposition
than
whereas
the export cost
was only 4%. As compared to the export cost
, the international transport and the taxes were 3times
and 4 Correct your spelling
3 times
times
more respectively. Besides
, the import licenses cost
double to
that of the producer and the profit was 18%, which was nearly four Change preposition
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times
the production.Submitted by raialon4047 on
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