The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph provides information about exportation of pineapples from the three countries in two different years whilst the pie chart demonstrates various categories of the distribution of the amount made from each of the fruits to the consumer.
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