The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar graph provides information about
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the
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exportation of pineapples from the three countries in two different years whilst the pie chart demonstrates various categories of the distribution of the amount made from each of the fruits to the consumer.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
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country
B used to sell the highest quantity of the products in the year 2009
however
country
A improved significantly after a decade
whereas
country
C remained almost steady in comparison to the former countries.
In addition
, it is seen that the highest proportion of the
cost
was accounted
to
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distribution and retail and the export costs
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very little if compared to it. To elaborate more from the bar graph, in the
beginning
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period of time,
country
B was at the top,being higher by almost 3 million metric
tonnes
than
country
A which was about
1.5million
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1.5 million
metric
tonnes
and
country
C was even less than that.After ten years,
country
A rose
it's
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its
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sales by nearly
9million
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9 million
metric
tonnes
whereas
country
B dropped by roughly
3million
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3 million
metric
tonnes
. As compared to these,
country
C had little or no change at all. As per the information from the second graph, the highest proportion of money which was as high as 35% , went to distribution and retail.
This
price was
7times
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7 times
greater
to
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that of the producer
whereas
the export
cost
was only 4%. As compared to the export
cost
, the international transport and the taxes were
3times
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3 times
and 4
times
more respectively.
Besides
, the import licenses
cost
double
to
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that of the producer and the profit was 18%, which was nearly four
times
the production.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words country, cost, tonnes, times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • world pineapple exports
  • top three producing countries
  • 2009
  • 2019
  • breakdown
  • cost to the consumer
  • main features
  • comparison
  • relevant
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