The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the facilities of a major university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the facilities of a major university in 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
percentage
of academic personnel, divided by gender, in 7 facilities of a major university during 2012.
Overall
, it is evident that the
faculty
of engineering has the highest and lowest
percentage
of academics, with apply
above
Change preposition
than
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80 in men and roughly 18% in women. Focusing on academic male
staff
, it can be seen that the number in each
faculty
was over 40%, apart from education which at just above 20%.
Furthermore
, both business and science
faculty
exhibited comparable percentages, approximating 62%, and female personnel
similarly
displayed a
percentage
of about 37%. Turning to women who worked in
faculty
, the
percentage
of
staff
exceeded 25% in all
faculty
, with the exception of engineering.
In addition
, approximately 30% of
faculty
members in the
faculty
of medicine were both men and women Despite
this
, the
faculty
of education exhibited the highest
percentage
of female
staff
, approximating 87%,
while
conversely
, it had the lowest
percentage
of male academic
staff
, just above 20%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, faculty, staff with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender distribution
  • faculty
  • academic staff
  • proportion
  • disparity
  • trends
  • significance
  • broader societal trends
  • gender equality
  • university environment
  • implications
  • predominantly
  • minority
  • skewed
  • equal representation
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