The table below shows how young people in Tokyo, Japan, listened to music over the previous month. The pie chart shows a record company's international findings about whether people preferred live or recorded music. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table displays how young Japanese listened to the pie chart shows the percentage of Live harmony which is around 70% is 3 times more than Recorded .
music
over the last
month, while
the pie chart illustrates the record company’s international results on preferences for live or recorded music
. Overall
, MP3 players have been the most popular way of listening to tunes for boys. On the other hand
, Live music
and the Internet have had the same fans belong girls. Also
, all generations prefer to listen to live songs.
First,
with the table, it is clear that
men are stronger fans of music
rather than women. In contrast
, listening to melodies on CDs is a bit popular for girls. There is no drastic difference between all other three types of instruments for females. Indeed, they were all around 40% to 44%.
Second,
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at
According to
the chart, a tiny proportion which is 4% belongs to people who don't know how they prefer to listen to music
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