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The table below shows how young people in Tokyo, Japan, listened to music over the previous month. The pie chart shows a record company's international findings about whether people preferred live or recorded music. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how young people in Tokyo, Japan, listened to music over the previous month. The pie chart shows a record company's international findings about whether people preferred live or recorded music. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table displays how young Japanese listened to
music
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 over the
last
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 month,
while
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 the pie chart illustrates the record company’s international results on preferences for live or recorded
music
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Overall
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, MP3 players have been the most popular way of listening to tunes for boys.
On the other hand
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, Live
music
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 and the Internet have had the same fans belong girls.
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, all generations prefer to listen to live songs.
First,
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with the table,
it is clear that
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 men are stronger fans of
music
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 rather than women.
In contrast
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, listening to melodies on CDs is a bit popular for girls. There is no drastic difference between all other three types of instruments for females. Indeed, they were all around 40% to 44%.
Second,
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looking
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the pie chart shows the percentage of Live harmony which is around 70% is 3 times more than Recorded .
According to
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 the chart, a tiny proportion which is 4% belongs to people who don't know how they prefer to listen to
music
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Vocabulary: Replace the words music with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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