More and more people are moving from rural areas to live in cities. What problems can this cause? How can these problems be solved?
In our days a lot of
people
prefer living in cities Use synonyms
than
living in Change preposition
to
Add an article
the country
country side
. Because urban areas Correct your spelling
countryside
ofer
more opportunities for living, Correct your spelling
offer
such
as jobs and education, more villages have been left by Linking Words
teen
Replace the word
teenage
people
.
Relocation from Use synonyms
countryside
to Add an article
the countryside
urban
side Correct article usage
the urban
cause
Change the verb form
causes
same
Correct article usage
the same
problems
. One of Use synonyms
main
Add an article
the main
problems
is that the villages become abandoned, all youth Use synonyms
people
are gone for education or work and there Use synonyms
stays
only elderly Change the verb form
stay
people
that cannot go anywhere. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Furthermore
cities are overpopulated, rental prices Add a comma
Furthermore,
go
up and is increasing homelessness. Wrong verb form
are going
Additionally
transport system became agglomerated Linking Words
that
Correct word choice
apply
cause
a lot of traffic Wrong verb form
causing
problems
and overloaded transport. Use synonyms
Also
healthcare system Linking Words
suffer
Change the verb form
suffers
of
a large number of Change preposition
from
people
Use synonyms
that
need help. Correct pronoun usage
who
For instance
, all teenagers Linking Words
goes
to study in Chişinău and after finishing their studies they stay here Change the verb form
go
for living
causing overpopulation.
Change preposition
to live
For
Change preposition
To
solution
Replace the word
solve
this
problem Linking Words
guvernaments
can create living conditions in all Correct your spelling
governments
country
to reduce Fix the agreement mistake
countries
this
migration. By investing in infrastructure, Linking Words
such
as affordable housing and efficient public transport, cities can better accommodate a growing population. Linking Words
Moreover
, rural development initiatives Linking Words
such
as creating local job opportunities and improving educational facilities can make rural areas more attractive, reducing the need for Linking Words
people
to migrate. Use synonyms
For example
, in China, investments in rural regions have been successful in reducing Linking Words
rural to urban
migration pressures.
In Add a hyphen
rural-to-urban
conclusion
Add a comma
conclusion,
while
migration to urban areas can cause lots of Linking Words
problems
, exist Use synonyms
solution
to Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
Linking Words
this
challenges. Effective urban planning and efforts to make rural living more viable can help to a better quality of life for all residents.Correct determiner usage
these
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