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The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar
chart
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 indicates comprehensive information regarding the ratio of exportation of pineapple in three countries in a one-decade interval (2009 to 2019),
along with
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 a pie
chart
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 illustrating the portion of the breakdown of the price of each pineapple to the customers. From an
overall
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 perspective, it is starkly apparent that despite
country
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 B the other two countries faced an increment in 2019, with
country
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 A having the most enhancement. Retailers accounted for the most breakdown cost,
whereas
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 the Exports cost stood at the least one. Upon more rigorous scrutiny, it can be discerned that
according to
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 the pie
chart
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, the biggest slice was taken by retailers with just above one-
third,
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followed by figures related to profit and taxes with 18 and 16% respectively. International and Import licenses accounted for almost the same proportion with a tenth almost twofold the amount of the figures for producers and export costs, 5 and 4 % sequentially. As regards to bar
chart
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, it can seen that the most promotion took place in
country
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 A, with nearly 1 million
tonne
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 which was ten times more than in 2009.
In contrast
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,
country
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 B displayed a downward trend reaching an all-time low in 2019 with fewer than 2 million tonnes.
Country
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 C,
however
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, faced a negligible escalation and remained
in
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at
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 the bottom of the list.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • world pineapple exports
  • top three producing countries
  • 2009
  • 2019
  • breakdown
  • cost to the consumer
  • main features
  • comparison
  • relevant
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