The best way to solve the world's enviromental prolem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Currently, we all
has
observed Change the verb form
have
surge
in Add an article
a surge
rate
of Add an article
the rate
gas
which aids to solve
environmental issues. Many people argue that Change preposition
in solving
this
could be most
effective way as it benefits in limited use of motor cars and helps in protecting Correct article usage
the most
environment
. Add an article
the environment
This
essay would
prove that Wrong verb form
will
increase
in Correct article usage
an increase
price
of Add an article
the price
gas
is aid
in many Add an article
an aid
scence
.
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science
Firstly
, In support to
the statement, there is Change preposition
of
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a continous
continous
rise in carbon and other harmful gases in Correct your spelling
continuous
environment
which are released Add an article
an environment
the environment
from
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by
the
automotive gadgets Correct article usage
apply
have
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that have
appected
the Correct your spelling
appeared
appreciated
affected
earth
's ozon
protective layer, Correct your spelling
ozone
thus
, the current more useage of Add an article
the vehicle
a vehicle
vehicle
have impacted a lot by releasing them. Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
For instance
, according to
the recent researches
Fix the agreement mistake
research
showed
in newspapers there has been Wrong verb form
shown
25
% increment in the sales of four-wheel vehicles. Correct article usage
a 25
Which
means people are getting more adaptive to personal Correct pronoun usage
This
vehicle
, and it has become everyone's need. Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
Therefore
to balance the environmental issues and put cutt-off
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a cutt-off
in
unnecessary Change preposition
on
useage
of personal vehicles Correct your spelling
use
this
is the best step taken by Correct pronoun usage
apply
government
.
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the government
Secondly
, the excretion of tones
of fossil fuel from Correct your spelling
tons
earth's
core is now Correct article usage
the earth's
at
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on
its
verge Change the word
the
to finish
, Change preposition
of finishing
also
there are
only some named Change the verb form
is
country
like Saudi arab and the South East Asian countries Fix the agreement mistake
countries
who
export to Correct pronoun usage
that
majority
of the nations all around the world. Add an article
the majority
a majority
Therefore
, to cover all the expences
Correct your spelling
expenses
the
rise in Correct article usage
a
price
of Add an article
the price
gas
in
necessary. Correct your spelling
is
Moreover
, this
would result into
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in
prevention
of land, as there would be less digging and minimal damage to Add an article
the prevention
earth's
surface. Correct article usage
the earth's
However
, this
would be dificult
for normal Correct your spelling
difficult
man
to pay for Fix the agreement mistake
men
gas
, though
as per Correct word choice
apply
there
necessity and everyday travel to Correct your spelling
their
there
workplace. So, Correct your spelling
their
increase
in Correct article usage
an increase
rate
can be not Correct article usage
the rate
stoped
but can put Correct your spelling
stopped
limit
on it.
In conclusion, Add an article
a limit
Increase
in Correct article usage
an Increase
rate
of petrol is the best way for Correct article usage
the rate
envirnment
protection as there would be less carbon emission and minimal digging to the Correct your spelling
environment
environmental
earth
surface to prevent natural calamities , Change noun form
earth's
also
, there would be more promotion of public vehicles to travel short
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a short
distance
.Fix the agreement mistake
distances
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