some people think that children today are not as fit and healthy as in the past do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The period when

children

were physically fitter and mentally agile has gone,

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this

technological

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their deteriorating health is becoming a grave issue of concern. I completely endorse the statement, owing to several reasons, which are going to be elucidated in the upcoming segments.

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and foremost reason

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unhealthiness among

children

is technological gizmos. To be more precise, these days offspring are more inclined to use mobile phones, computers, laptops and so on.

Hence

,

children

have no interest in outdoor activities.

As a result

, they

are becoming

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couch potatoes and gain weight, which

also

reduces

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.

According to

the World Health Organization,

for instance

, the ratio of unhealthy juveniles has increased by 57% ever since the usage of electronic gadgets was introduced.

Likewise

, the availability and accessibility of fast

food

also

pave the way to force young people to suffer from diseases like obesity, heart attack, and many more at an early age. By

this

, I mean that one can have an easy approach towards junk foods that are not health-oriented.

Thus

, unhygienic

food

affects them badly. Not only

this

but

also

school

children

are bound to study for long hours at schools followed by tuition. In

this

case, they

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lack

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time to do physical activities and it causes a great study burden among them.

However

, some people believe that parents are very concerned about their

children

's health and put efforts into improving their erratic schedules and

food

habits.

Nevertheless

, guardians themselves are engaged in graveyard shifts and have a lack of time to guide their

children

, and they can't supervise their daily routine which poses a great threat to young one's lifestyles. To recapitulate, I vehemently vouch that there is a myriad of reasons which pose a great threat to the lifestyle of

children

, in terms of technological gadgets, hectic schedule, unawareness of serious consequences of indoor activities, junk

food

, and so on.