The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given illustration provides information about which steps need to be taken in order to manufacture biofuel named
ethanol
.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that the process comprises ten stages.
Nevertheless
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there are three main stages, namely the absorption of energy, the production and consumption of
ethanol
, and the emitting of the biofuel resources back into the environment. First of all, energy is absorbed by
plants
and trees, including the combination of sunlight and carbon dioxide, which create the crucial components for producing
ethanol
. Afterwards, the
plants
and trees are harvested,
they
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and they
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enter a phase of pre-processing in order to become cellulose.Following that, cellulose is chemically processed to make sugars.
Next,
sugars are
then
added with microbes to turn them into
ethanol
. Ultimately, produced
ethanol
is consumed by cars, trucks, and
plants
, which eventually release carbon dioxide back
to
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into
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the environment. The carbon dioxide in the atmosphere is
then
re-absorbed by
plants
and trees, continuing to repeat the cycle.
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