Many people join distance-learning programmes and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Although

some people insist that joining learning programs

on line

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online

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and studying at

home

cannot bring the same advantage as directly attending colleges or universities does, I

am totally disagree

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with

this

idea. The

reasons

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for

this

is

because

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joining educational courses online is, in fact, more beneficial for many people in saving

time

and online courses enable us to manage our schedules more

effeciently

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efficiently

. Taking part in distance-learning programs and studying at

home

cost

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us less

time

, when we consider having a long journey to the halls and

class rooms

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classrooms

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where lectures are taking happen; we can save a lot of

time

by skipping the process of heading toward the places.

The

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for

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this

is; amid COVID-19, all the conferences and lectures have been cancelled to stop

infection

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the infection

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and,

instead

, they were switched to online meetings and lectures, which enabled lots of workers and officers, who

otherwise

would have had

a

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time consuming

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jouney

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journey

to the avenue, to join these activities at

home

or at their workplace on

time

.

Furthermore

, online courses are more flexible because we do not have to consider the place.

That is

to say, we can

forcus

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focus

on arranging the

time

schedules

according to

only each other's schedule because we do not have to compete with other companies for the

reservation

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preservation

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of the place.

For instance

, if we are to arrange a physical

studying

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study

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program at a hospital, we have to make sure

each

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of each

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other's schedule,

book

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and book

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a conference room, and we often find ourselves not being able to decide the schedule in the way we wish because the conference room has been already occupied until several weeks ahead.

This

is not the case in online studying; everyone can join on smartphones, laptops or desktops anywhere

under

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the

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good

Inthernet

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Internet

environment. In conclusion,

while

some

individual

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individuals

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argue that joining distance-learning programmes and studying at

home

cannot outweigh the benefit of directly and physically attending colleges and universities, in reality, the former produces

much

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many

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more benefits than the latter because it is

time saving

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time-saving

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and its flexibility of schedules makes it much easier for many people to work.