The maps below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided maps illustrate the Porth Harbour in two distinct time frames namely currently and in the year 2000.

Overall

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, it can be seen that there are some new features today

such

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as cafes and shops, new showers and toilets and an additional passenger ferry in comparison with the past.

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, we clearly notice some relocations and renovations including the changing place of the fishing boats' section with the Marina and turning the castle into a

hotel

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over the period given.

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, similarities are great since the harbour remained in the same location and solely faced developments and renovations.

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not only was the abandoned castle renovated into a

hotel

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but

also

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the public beach next to it turned to private ownership and is dedicated to

hotel

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guests. The two car parks stay at their place but the connection from the main road to the southern car park is removed and a new connection to the road in the south is introduced.

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, the southern road is extended to the

hotel

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as well.

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, the northern public beach remained intact,

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, and we currently have three docks and passenger ferries

instead

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of two in 2000. The newly constructed showers and toilets are located in the north of the bigger car park in the southwest of the plan.

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, fresh cafes and shops are installed on the left side of the lifeboats.

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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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