The graph below shows changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US between 1970 and 2010.

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The graph depicted the changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US between 1970 and 2010. Regarding truck

registration

, it dropped dramatically from 1970 to 1980 by around 20% but it

then

rose steadily from 1980 to 2010 by about 15%.

On the other hand

, taxi

registration

raised

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significantly

form

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from

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1970 to 1980

for

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about 10% but it

then

dropped drastically from 1980 to 2000.

However

, it suddenly increased dramatically by 20% from 2000 to 2010.

Comparing

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to the other two types of vehicle, bus

registration

did not show too much fluctuation. It climbed steadily from 1970 to 1980 by about 10% and dropped slightly from 180 to 2010 by around 11%.

By comparison

, bus

registration

remained steady over the 40 years

while

taxi

registration

was a bit unpredictable as it fluctuated from time to time.

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