The graph below shows changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US between 1970 and 2010.
The graph depicted the changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US between 1970 and 2010.
Regarding truck
registration
, it dropped dramatically from 1970 to 1980 by around 20% but it Use synonyms
then
rose steadily from 1980 to 2010 by about 15%. Linking Words
On the other hand
, taxi Linking Words
registration
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raised
significantly Verb problem
increased
form
1970 to 1980 Correct your spelling
from
for
about 10% but it Change preposition
by
then
dropped drastically from 1980 to 2000. Linking Words
However
, it suddenly increased dramatically by 20% from 2000 to 2010. Linking Words
Comparing
to the other two types of vehicle, bus Wrong verb form
Compared
registration
did not show too much fluctuation. It climbed steadily from 1970 to 1980 by about 10% and dropped slightly from 180 to 2010 by around 11%.
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By comparison
, bus Linking Words
registration
remained steady over the 40 years Use synonyms
while
taxi Linking Words
registration
was a bit unpredictable as it fluctuated from time to time.Use synonyms
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