The diagram below shows the life cycle of a butterfly

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a butterfly
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The illustration depicts the lifecycle of a butterfly. The 5-step cycle begins with an egg and ends with
transformation
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a transformation
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into
adult
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an adult
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butterfly. The process starts with the tiny egg of
butterfly
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a butterfly
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, which becomes a caterpillar. At
this
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step caterpillar with
unique
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a unique
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pattern feeds on leaves and gains energy. After
caterpillar
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the caterpillar
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goes forward into
next
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the next
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step of its evolution and turns into
chrysalis
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a chrysalis
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, where it matures.
Consequntly
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Consequently
,
matured
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the matured
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butterfly emerges and develops into an adult butterfly.
Eventually
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Eventually,
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the process commences again.
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