The diagram below shows the life cycle of a butterfly

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a butterfly
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The butterfly has a life cycle with four stages: egg, caterpillar,
chrysalis
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, and adult.
First,
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the butterfly lays eggs on a leaf. After some time, small caterpillars come out of the eggs. They eat leaves and grow very fast.
Next,
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the caterpillar stops eating and makes a
chrysalis
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.
This
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is like a shell where it can rest and change. Inside the
chrysalis
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, the caterpillar turns into a butterfly.
This
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process is called metamorphosis. After a few days or weeks, the adult butterfly comes out of the
chrysalis
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. At
first,
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its wings are wet and soft. The butterfly waits for the wings to dry.
Then
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it can fly. The butterfly looks for flowers to drink nectar and find a partner.
Finally
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, the butterfly lays eggs, and the life cycle starts again.
This
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shows how amazing nature can be!

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "first, ".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chrysalis with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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