The graph below shows changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US between 1970 and 2010.

The graph below shows changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US between 1970 and 2010.
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illustrates
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illustrates
the changes made over time in the share of
vehical
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vehicle
registrations
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in the US of the three most common types of
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commercial vehicles
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between 1970 and 2010 In the year 1970, The
registrations
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for taxis and buses showed an increase
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the
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of
trucks
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showed a decrease. After a decade, in the year 1980,
in contrast
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to 1970, the
numbers
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number
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of
trucks
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registered showed a sudden incline
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the other two types of
vehicle
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vehicles
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showed a decline. The
number
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of
trucks
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getting
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registered each year
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constant from 1980 to 1990
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the other two still declined. The
number
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of
trucks
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kept on increasing till 2010 but ended at 45%
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the percentage of
registrations
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for
trucks
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in 1970 was 49%. From 2000-2010 the
number
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of
registrations
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for taxis showed a significant increase and ended at 35% in 2010 which is 10 percentage points more than when it started. The
number
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of
registrations
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for buses showed a constant decline till 2010 and ended at 3% which is 2 less than the percentage points it started with.
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, the only vehicle that increased in
registrations
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over the period of 4 decades were taxis
while
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the other two decreased.
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