The graph below shows changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US between 1970 and 2010.
The graph below
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vehical
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vehicle
registrations
in the US of the three most common types of commercials vehicle
between 1970 and 2010
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commercial vehicles
registrations
for taxis and buses showed an increase whereas
the registrations
of trucks
showed a decrease. After a decade, in the year 1980, in contrast
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trucks
registered showed a sudden incline while
the other two types of vehicle
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while
the other two still declined. The number
of trucks
kept on increasing till 2010 but ended at 45% while
the percentage of registrations
for trucks
in 1970 was 49%. From 2000-2010 the number
of registrations
for taxis showed a significant increase and ended at 35% in 2010 which is 10 percentage points more than when it started. The number
of registrations
for buses showed a constant decline till 2010 and ended at 3% which is 2 less than the percentage points it started with.
To conclude
, the only vehicle that increased in registrations
over the period of 4 decades were taxis while
the other two decreased.Submitted by satyarthverma88 on
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