Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people prefer traditional treatment to modern

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, so they may not tend to consult a doctor when they

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trend, which may not be new because throughout several historical

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societies

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relied on

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kind of

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, can pose significant damage to our

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a solution for

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problems. On the one hand, the figure of

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to alternative

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increased dramatically over the

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decade. A lot of those

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might not trust modern

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or find it exorbitant and affordable.

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, Depending on traditional

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is not a new trend, it was the sole source

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for various diseases before the

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of modern

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, which is based on research conducted at specialist centres.

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, traditional treatment may cause damage rather than be useful. Because its ingredients do not pass through scientific observation.to illustrate, even modern medical drugs , which are produced by a very sensitive process, sometimes cause considerable symptoms and should be taken under detailed instructions and directions. The responsible authorities can mitigate

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risk by restricting regulations organize

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field, making it more reliable.

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, some complex diseases,

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as heart attacks or cancer, need a complex healing process and it is impossible to be treated

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traditional ways,

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, those providing traditional treatment should adhere to not deal with

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diseases. In conclusion, As using alternative

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is not a new trend

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, it is not reliable to allow

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to depend on it to treat their

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problems. Personally, I believe that

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field offers us a remarkable opportunity to enhance public

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if detailed research is conducted.