Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people prefer traditional treatment to modern

medical

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, so they may not tend to consult a doctor when they

fell

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ill. I think that

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trend, which may not be new because throughout several historical

period

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societies

had been

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relied on

this

kind of

treatments

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, can pose significant damage to our

health

instead

of

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a solution for

health

problems. On the one hand, the figure of

individuals

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to alternative

medicine

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increased dramatically over the

last

decade. A lot of those

individuals

might not trust modern

medical

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medicine

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or find it exorbitant and affordable.

Moreover

, Depending on traditional

medicine

is not a new trend, it was the sole source

remedies

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for various diseases before the

arise

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rise

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of modern

medicine

, which is based on research conducted at specialist centres.

However

, traditional treatment may cause damage rather than be useful. Because its ingredients do not pass through scientific observation.to illustrate, even modern medical drugs , which are produced by a very sensitive process, sometimes cause considerable symptoms and should be taken under detailed instructions and directions. The responsible authorities can mitigate

this

risk by restricting regulations organize

this

field, making it more reliable.

Additionally

, some complex diseases,

such

as heart attacks or cancer, need a complex healing process and it is impossible to be treated

by

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traditional ways,

thus

, those providing traditional treatment should adhere to not deal with

individuals

with

such

diseases. In conclusion, As using alternative

medicine

is not a new trend

itself

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, it is not reliable to allow

individuals

to depend on it to treat their

health

problems. Personally, I believe that

this

field offers us a remarkable opportunity to enhance public

health

if detailed research is conducted.