The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
The bar charts show the
percentage
of the population
in the UK in 2002, 2006 and 2010 who consumed the daily recommended amount
of fruit and vegetables. It is evident that each year women
had the highest percentage
of the population
who consumed the recommended daily amount
followed by men
and children
.
In 2002, Women
had the largest population
of people who consumed the daily recommended amount
of fruit and vegetables at 25% followed by men
at 22% and lastly
by children
at only 11%. All three categories showed a significant increase in 2006 with women
who showed an increase of 7 percentage
points
at 32% while
men
showed an increase of 6 percentage
points
at 28% followed by children
at 16%. Things took a drastic turn in 2010,
when all three categories fell by a lot Remove the comma
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while
the population
of people who ate the advised daily amount
of fruits and veggies were still higher than that in 2002. Women
contributed the most with 27% followed by men
who were 3 percentage
points
behind women
at 24% whereas
only 14% of the children
consumed the daily amount
advised.
In comparison to these values from 2002, It is clear that
the population
of both men
and women
eating the daily advised amount
of fruits and vegetables have increased by 2 percentage
points
while
the population
of children
eating the advised amount
has increased by 3 percentage
points
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